This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example. In the weekend I had to do lots of shoppingKmart with my Mum. We went to the shopdairy to get some foodSpicy rice. We also went to look for a present bike for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a dollAnna belle and a soft toy Teddy bear. After that we went to the shopKmart to buy some clothes Tops , I got two new itemslong dress back and short at the front and a pair of shoes.Air Max Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice blockChocolate cookie cream . Lucky me! Ka kite!! From Hulita
Today we were learning how to write positive things to negative things here's an example.Look at the top.
There are something that are positive like e.g.Tell the teacher that they know your password. Plus an outcome like this You might get a new password from the teacher.
Yesterday we have been writing about the Rugby World Cup because the ALL BLACKS won AGAIN!CHAMPIONS Have a look at my writing about the Rugby World Cup.