We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of
Ka kite!!
From Hulita
Thursday, 26 November 2015
WALT : Use Precise Nouns To Detail For Our Reader.
This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots ofshopping Kmart with my Mum. We went to the shop dairy to get some food Spicy rice. We also went to look for a present bike for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll Anna belle and a soft toy Teddy bear. After that we went to the shop Kmart to buy some clothes Tops , I got two new items long dress back and short at the front and a pair of shoes.Air Max Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block Chocolate cookie cream . Lucky me!
Ka kite!!
From Hulita
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of
Ka kite!!
From Hulita
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Hi Hulita,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explain your words out clearly.And also the spelling is super impressive to the reader.
Keep on blogging.
From Cicilia